It was as if I was seeing her for the first time
Not the girl I was used to she was so new to my eyes
In her wedding gown it hit me then that she was someone’s bride
This day how I wish this day would have also be mine
At hand a fake plastic rose she gave me years ago
To symbolize our love that would never die
Mixed emotions was evident in her face that she couldn’t hide
It was hard to tell what she was feeling inside
I was merely three steps from her yet it felt like a couple miles
Handed her the rose not sure if this was goodbye
A memorable day it was the first time I saw her face
A perfect picture I’ve hold since the age of ten
Going home from school just like any other day no good reason to smile
Then I saw this beautiful Angel sitting outside
She seemed so promising like the next day
The girl next door was her title until finally I heard her name
“Jane, come inside and lock the door it’s about to rain”
So Jane was the name and so I said to myself
For weeks we played the eye game
Exchanging glance at each other but no words said
Until her birthday when all that changed
27th March on a Monday it was I was passing by her place
She called by my name
I ignored thinking my imagination are getting wilder by day
She called again
I stood still not knowing which response to give
She came closer an invitation card handed to me
Happy birthday Jane
She smiled a bit and went back in
Our very first date wasn’t sure if I would live to see this day
Seven years later and for sure it was worth the wait
When I asked her if she was willing to be mine
She didn’t say a word but nodded with tears on her eyes
It was a dream I thought only that it was daytime
She became an extension of me
A part of me I didn’t know if I’ll be able to live without
I prayed and hope that the day will never come for us to find out
Happy ever after don’t exist and so that unwanted day definitely reached
I got a scholarship to go and study abroad
I was supposed to be excited but for some reason I wasn’t
A lot can change in five years the same way five years can change a lot
It was not in my place to say no
As I was about to take my place in the flight
A plastic coloured rose she gave me
Until the day this rose dies know that your heart will forever be mine
Five years wasn’t forever and forever wasn’t as long
And finally I was back home
Jane the first one on my mind and her door I went to knock
But she was not alone with her was this guy I thought I’ve seen before
The same guy she’s been posting on her instagram
Even though I wasn’t good in maths
For sure this was a simple sum
A lot can change in five years the same way five years can change a lot
And for that very reason I blamed her not
Awkward moments between us and finally we got used to that
Until the day she told me that for her hand she was asked
And she wanted to know my take on that
How could I tell her that my feelings for her are still the same
And in the five-year period nothing really changed
And for first time the words to say to her I lacked
Jane my blessings you have
Hoping that to her was enough
For what I really wanted to say remained at heart
On her wedding day I went to give my last regards
At hand a fake plastic rose she gave me years ago
To symbolize our love that would never die
Mixed emotions was evident in her face that she couldn’t hide
It was hard to tell what she was feeling inside
I was merely three steps from her yet it felt like a couple miles
Handed her the rose not sure if this was goodbye
Getting better and better Bruv you’re like wine getting better with time Big up bro!!!
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Bruvπ¦
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Wow….woooooow….this is awesomeeeeeeee….I loooove thiiiissss
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What a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. So lovely! The flow the discreption are all so
wonderful! Congrats bro
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your words blow my mindπππ
i love this π―
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ππnever been this emotional..splendid work of art
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Totally relatable… Story of our lives…i love it.π
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I love love love love love love love it……. Creative, unique, and totally breathtaking….. ππ
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Such a beautiful piece.
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Mahn this one deserves an award
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Masha Allah Bro.
Simple but it’s masterpiece.πππ.
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Sad reality of life… you never get the one you loveππ
Good one brother
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MashaAllah this is soooo epic
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If it has a semblance of your past, please let it go. Since if there is smoke here, there must have been a fire somewhere.
Some heart is dying out there for you, give her a chance too.
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Awww I have read like ten times can’t get enough of it…. Epic
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Uuuh mapezii
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The most painful experiences of our life give birth to the most beautiful creations….
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Very true
I really appreciate that
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Alot of appreciation to all those who took their time to read
And thank you all for your comments
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“In her wedding gown it hit me then that she was someoneβs bride,” Wow. you definitely caught my attention there. I love the transparency of your emotions here.
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Thank you very much
I really appreciate that
Just from read your work “Betrayal’s Embrace”ππππ
I really loved it
Looking forward to read more from you
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I am looking forward to read most if not all of your work! As soon as I am free, expect me reading your creations. Good job!!
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Thank you I really appreciate that
Am also looking forward to read yours
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Thanks, I am still on the process of getting better and I’m sure I will get there.
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Yeah sure you will
Actually we are in that process
The more you write the better you get with time
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That was a poignant tale. Who knew a plastic rose could be interpreted as a symbol of undying love too. Lovely indeed!
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Thanks am humbled by your comments
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oh that was awosome and emotional story that kept me reading till the end and i loved your poetry such inspirational one for other writers π a story that is true and happens and is close to reality and easy to understand loved it keep writing
flyingcolors
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Am very humble by your comment
I really appreciate that
Thanks a lot flyingcolours
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This is beautiful…and heartbreaking.
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I love this!ππ
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Beautifully expressed. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you π
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Wow! Justβ¦Wow!
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This was beautiful!
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Thanks π
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really nice article keep up! good work!
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Humbled ππ
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All poets need dark times .. It is then we find ourselves and the meaning with our writings. Good Luck and read much both old and new poetry .
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I will thank you
I really appreciate that
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Owesome.I love this so much
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Thanks it means alotππ
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